Dylan wrote the following sentence for his research paper on giraffes. The wide savannah is roamed by tall, graceful giraffes. His teacher told him to revise this sentence so th…

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Rocco · Answer 1 · 2021-10-10T19:34:40+0000

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Tall, graceful giraffes roam the wide savannah. You can revise the sentence by describing the giraffes first.

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Keepitterron · Answer 2 · 2021-10-14T02:20:25+0000

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Tall, graceful giraffes roam the wide savannah.

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i dont know how to explain it but i think thats right