Question

Add adjectives to improve the following passage.

The man stopped by the park to pet the dog. Then he stepped onto the bus. The bus made stops before it pulled up in front of a(n) restaurant. He jumped out and ran up the steps. A while later, he returned with a bag of scraps for the dog

Answer 1

I believe the person above is right

Answer 2

the man stopped by the park to pet the happy dog. Then, he stepped onto the grimey, cold bus. The bus made many halting stops before it pulled up infront of a local resturant. He jumped out and ran up the icey steps. A while later, he returned with a bag of warms scraps to for the starving dog.

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