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My favorite place to get away to think is in my living room It is important to have such place because there's that special couch corner.When i'm not there my siblings got there early, and they got really good seats. I get mad. Sometimes i get there first, and sometimes i don't.

Is there any thing i need to add to the sentence?

Answer 1

If the assignment is about your favorite place to get away then I think it's pretty good. I would possibly add a little bit as to why its your favorite place to get away to think.

Answer 2

After living room and before It is important... you need a period.

Capitalize your i's