Question

Choose the sentence that is in the best order.

Waiting for the dentist, a story in Boy's Life interested me. Or

A story in Boy's Life interested me while I was waiting for the dentist.

Answer 1

The answer is number 2, "A story in Boy's Life interested me while I was waiting for the dentist."

Answer 2

2nd Sentence

Seems more complete and is easier to read.

A story in Boy's Life interested me while I was waiting for the dentist.

Additional Information:

You could change the first sentence to:

While waiting for the dentist, a story in Boy's Life had interested me.