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Read this excerpt from a student's analytical ennay,

I think poetry allows Alice to communicate more effectively with the unusual citizens of the
Looking-Glass land,
2. Which is the best way to revise this sentence to give it a more formal style? (1 point)
Delete the casual phrase "I think."
Delete the word "unusual."
Revise the entire sentence,
Revise some of the word choices,

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Step-by-step explanation:

Revise the sentence below to make it more formal: 'You're going to get really fat if you ... C. when the person or thing performing the action is a proper noun ... Provide additional support for the topic sentence, and revise the whole paragraph ..

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Delete the casual phrase i think
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