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As I walked through the empty building, I could hear the groans of the walls as they settled in for the night.

delete the comma after building

insert a comma after walls

change they to it

no change needed

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Add comma after walls
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User BustedSanta
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Answer:

No change needed

Step-by-step explanation:

I think it sounds good the way it is, it doesn't need a change.

hope this helps :)

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User SidR
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