Question

HURRY PLEASE, TIMED!!

Read the conclusion.

In conclusion, people should have realized by now that exploring the Earth’s ocean is the smart thing to do. It’s about time people wake up and see the opportunities in front of them. Let’s stop being lazy and get moving.

Which revision is most needed to make the conclusion effective?

A)adding a call to action at the end to give the writing a more powerful rhythm
B)changing the sentence structures to be simple sentences to improve clarity
C)moderating the tone to be more respectful and appropriate to an argumentative essay
D)adding a sentence with evidence to make the flow of the sentences more interesting

Answer 1

c

Step-by-step explanation:

it is so harsh so making it calmer is the best answer for an argumentative text. it isnt a opinion essay.