Question

Walking in Hollywood ( please tell me what you think )

written by me
I was walking in hollywood
I had to turn around
But my car was towed
To the other side of town
I walked 3 miles
Without a smile
I Asked for a ride
I wanted to cry
everyone so no
so i sat down and cryed

Answer 1

I think it doesnt have a smooth rhyme scheme but the story telling is alright.