Question

Which of the following thesis statements does not need to be rewritten?

A. Sandra Cisneros's The House on Mango Street is a book that
should be read by everyone.
B. In her book The House on Mango Street, Sandra Cisneros has
created a classic and poignant coming-of-age story.
C. The House on Mango Street, by Sandra Cisneros, affected me
deeply.
D. The House on Mango Street is a book of short stories about the
same girl.

Answer 1

Answer: B

Explanation: You should't really say in her book and then the name because thats not proper grammar its better if you say, "in the book"