What should the writer do to correct this sentence? During the game Mary wanted to go to the concession stand badly, but it was too interesting to leave.

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Sagi Forbes · Answer 1 · 2023-10-25T23:26:31+0000

Answer:

During the game, Mary wanted to go to the concession stand badly; but it was too interesting to leave.

Step-by-step explanation:

assuming that you just want to fix it grammatically:

add a comma after the word game because it is a dangling modifier

add a semicolon after the word badly because it separates 2 independent clauses.