Question

Someone in your peer review group says that a story needs more details about the setting. How could you build on her comment in a way that helps the writer make the story better?

A. Make a list of details that you would add if it were your story.

B. Disagree with the comment and tell the writer that the story is perfect.

C. Suggest a different order for the story's events.

D. Ask the writer questions about where and when the story happened.

Answer 1

A. Make a list of details that you would add if it were your story.

Answer 2

D, with a little bit of a as examples. You don’t want to take away from the authors vision but to show them ways they could improve the setting