Question

Is the following question punctuated correctly?

What makes me nervous, is that I entered the numbers of 2 of my Credit Cards that were not accepted, however, my VISA debit card number was accepted.

If not please rewrite it with the correct punctuation.

Answer 1

* Remove the comma after 'nervous.'

* Replace the comma after 'accepted' with a semicolon.

BTW.... You should know that...

* The number 2 should be written as 'two.'

* The words 'Credit Cards' should NOT be capitalized.