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CAN SOMONE CHECK THIS FOR PUNCTUATION AND SPELLING :)

Dewey does a good job of making the point that young teachers are leaving the profession early and our education is suffering because of this. She gets her point across using evidence and facts. Too many young teachers are leaving their jobs and we as taxpayers are paying for this loss. Also, without consistent education, kids might not get the teaching they deserve and might end up in jail later on in life. Dewey makes it clear that this isn’t a good situation and something must be done about it.

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sounds good maybe just change kids to children so it sounds more formal
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