Question

“So, then it was, like, my turn to try the new machine thingy. It was, ummm, so sweet!”

Identify the problem language in this statement and then rewrite the statement to correct the problem.

Answer 1

To re-put it you can say, "Then, it was my turn to try the new machine. It was so sweet!"

Step-by-step explanation:

The original way they put it had to many commas

Answer 2

Problem words: like, ummm, and thingy

Step-by-step explanation:

Rewrite it:

So then it was my turn to try the new machine. It was so sweet!