Question

This is my first time attempting writing a poem does this sound ok and if you have tips please do say :)

Forgiveness,
there is only fear
to forever kill
tortured, blood stained
a cross on the table, a blueish heart

Maybe one day...

Answer 1

I say its good for a mystery as it's genre

Step-by-step explanation:

- very vague explanation of what's happening, but it does

sound spooky.

- Grammer changes can also help

happy Halloween btw! :)