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Choose the BEST way to improve the paragraph. Benjamin Franklin was a very important figure in American history. He conducted many different scientific experiments that furthered the knowledge of the time. In addition, he was a famous printer; in fact, that is how he made his living. If truth be told, Benjamin Franklin was super cool. Include more of the opinions of the author. Alter how the sentences are started. Rewrite the last sentence to maintain the tone. Change the topic to something more current

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Answer: i think its rewrite the last sentence to maintain tone

Explanation: saying he was cool doesn't sound professional nor does it sound academic

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