Question

Are these in parellelism structure, and if not can you please tell me the corrections guys?

1. When spending the night at a friend’s house, Lacy thanked the parents, says goodbye to her friend, and drives carefully on the way home

2.Jim Opened the menu, smiled at the waiter, and will order the steak.

3. Wes played his computer game, practiced his free throws, and completed his French homework
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1. I am allergic to the dog’s hair and how it smells
2. James enjoys reading more than to write
3. Neither a sound scolding nor trying to beat the child did any good.

Answer 1

Parallelism structure means balance within one or more sentences of similar phrases or clauses that have the same grammatical structure.

Step-by-step explanation:

1. (Changed)
When spending the night at a friend’s house, Lacy thanking the parents, saying goodbye to her friend, and driving carefully on the way home.

2. (Changed)

Jim opened the menu, smiled at the waiter, and ordered the steak.

3. (No need change)
Wes played his computer game, practiced his free throws, and completed his French homework.

1. (Changed)

I am allergic to the dog’s hair and smell.

2. (Changed)

James enjoys reading more than writing.

3. (No change)

Neither a sound scolding nor trying to beat the child did any good.