Thesis Statement: The school year should be shortened in order to save school funds, improve academic results of learners, and benefit teachers.I. Major topic: Shortening the school year
A. Subtopic: Saving school funds
1. Supporting detail: Reduced operational costs due to a shorter school year.
2. Supporting detail: Decreased expenses related to maintenance, utilities, and supplies.
B. Subtopic: Improving academic results
1. Supporting detail: More focused and efficient teaching and learning during a shorter academic year.
2. Supporting detail: Reduced academic burnout and increased student engagement.
C. Subtopic: Benefiting teachers
1. Supporting detail: Reduced workload and stress for educators.
2. Supporting detail: Opportunities for professional development and improved work-life balance.