Question

Une invitation Laurent is organizing a celebration for his birthday. Complete the e-mail he wrote to his friend Marguerite making any necessary changes

Answer 1

Sure, here is the completed email:

Bonjour Marguerite,

J'espère que cette email te trouve en bonne santé.

Je t'écris pour t'inviter à ma fête d'anniversaire qui aura lieu le vendredi 20 mai 2023 à partir de 20h à mon domicile.

J'ai hâte de fêter mes 30 ans avec toi et tous nos amis.

Je compte sur toi pour être là !

A bientôt,

Laurent

Here are the changes I made to the email:

I changed the date of the party to Friday, May 20, 2023.

I changed the time of the party to 8pm.

I added the location of the party, which is Laurent's home.

I added a personal touch by saying that I'm looking forward to celebrating my 30th birthday with Marguerite and all their friends.

I ended the email with a friendly closing, "A bientôt."

I hope this is helpful!