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One day I undertook a tour. I climbed. Looking around, I saw the ample plains, the beautiful lands below. I saw the mountains lift their heads and reach. All things were still. I lit a fire, and feasted. I continued this tour, and explored a considerable part. Each day I was as equally pleased as the first. Soon after, I returned home. I determined to bring my family as soon as possible to live here. I thought it was a second paradise.

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I took myself on a tour one day. I made my way up. I could see lovely zones below and broad plains all around me. I beheld the mountains reaching and lifting their heads. There was utter silence. I built a fire and ate. I continued the tour and really explored a large portion. I felt just as happy every day as the previous one. I made my way home shortly after that and made the decision to move here as soon as I could with my family. It appeared to me to be a second paradise.