Final answer:
Option C) 'We wanted to offer' is the correct revision that eliminates the inappropriate shift in verb tense in the given passage.
Step-by-step explanation:
The given question is asking to identify the revision that corrects the inappropriate shift in verb tense in the provided passage. To determine the correct revision, we need to identify the verb tense inconsistency in the original passage.
The original passage consists of sentences using different verb tenses. Option A) 'She will know how to use' is in future tense, Option B) 'She had the most experience' is in past tense, Option C) 'We wanted to offer' is in past tense, and Option D) 'The committee members think' is in present tense.
The correct revision to eliminate the inappropriate shift in verb tense would be Option C) 'We wanted to offer' because it is the only sentence in the past tense that is consistent with the verb tense used in the original passage.