Question

Pet canaries need large cages, wooden perches, some fresh water, and keep out of cold. Which phrase should be revised for a more parallel sentence? A. large cages B. wooden perches C. some fresh water D. keep out of cold

Answer 1

The phrase that should be revised for a more parallel sentence is (D) keep out of cold.

Step-by-step explanation:

In the original sentence, the other phrases "large cages," "wooden perches," and "some fresh water" all follow a parallel structure. They are all noun phrases describing things that pet canaries need. However, the phrase "keep out of cold" does not follow the same structure.