Question

Which sentence is correctly written?

The young lady dawned her best evening dress, and making her way through the grand ballroom, basked by the richness of her garments.

The young lady donned her best evening dress and made her way through the grand ballroom, basking in the richness of her garments.

The young lady dawned her best evening dress, and making her way through the grand ballroom, basking the richness of her garments.

The young lady donned her best evening dress and made her way through the grand ballroom, basked in the richness of her garments.

Answer 1

"The young lady dawned her best evening dress, and making her way through the grand ballroom, basked by the richness of her garments" is correct, although many people would chose to omit the first comma.