Question

Our neighborhood watch group would like to accept your offer to visit with our group next month. Your proposed presentation addresses many of the issues that are of immediate concern to our group. Given your impressive credentials, we value your input and look forward to your presentation. To solidify the details, please use my contact information below to contact me.

Sincerely,
Marissa Lee



What is the main reason this e-mail is not appropriate for a formal purpose?

Answer 1

believe the answer is: While the e-mail contains formal language in the body, the salutation is formatted incorrectly and the contact information is missing.