Is this the correct outline for a thesis?
 Title: advertising clothing to teens
 Thesis: Are advertisements aimed at teenagers effective? And, are they ethical?
 I. advertising aimed at teens is it ethical?
 A. aimed at teens
 B. ethical
 1. Varies 
 2. Not ethical
 II. Acne commercials
 A. possibly aimed at teens
 1. Teenagers
 2. Teens have acne
 3. Puberty 
 B. back to school advertisements
 C. teens to look good for school
 D. being in style 
 III. Are advertisement aimed at teens and are they ethical