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. Read the paragraph. I stared up at the blue-tinged moon. The pier was silent except for the soft sound of the water sloshing against the rowboat. The strumming sound of a guitar drifted from the cabin out over the lake. It had been a good summer. Which word would you circle if you wanted the writer to improve on a vague word? sloshing blue-tinged good strumming

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good, part its a small simple word
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User Stuyam
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Answer:

The word that need to be improved is good

Step-by-step explanation:

This vague word shows lack of clear perception or understanding and left out the author's creativity.

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User Timelyportfolio
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