PLEASE HELP ALL THE POINTS I HAVE
Read the paragraph from a personal narrative.
1. I met Elisa. 2. She was sitting on a blanket with her mom and her sister. 3. I was tossing a softball back-and-forth with some friends. 4. It was a really hot day at the park, and my friends and I were sweating a lot. 5. We went to drink from the fountain, but the water was hot too. 6. Elisa called us over to her blanket and pointed to an ice chest. 7. “Help yourself,” she said. 8. When I lifted the lid, the tops of several brightly colored fruit bars came into view.
What is needed at the beginning of sentence 1?
a sequence word
a strong example
a different pronoun
a time word or phrase