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(1) As I absorbed the many emotions surrounding me, I felt a wave of pride wash over me. (2) We had done our best and had valiantly fought until the end, never once doubting or giving up. (3) Our fan support had been phenomenal. (4) Although we had lost, everyone filed out of the bleachers with their heads held high and a good feeling in their hearts.

Which revision would best improve this paragraph?


Delete sentence 4 from the paragraph.

Replace “good” with “warm” in sentence 4.

Combine sentence 1 and sentence 2.

Add the sentence, “We led most of the game.”

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User Jamsheer
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You would replace good with warm


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User Glen T
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The answer is Replace "good" with "warm" in sentence 4.
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User Alpy
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