Question

HURRY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tris Imboden has drummed for Stevie Wonder and Julio Iglesias however, most know him as the drummer in the band Chicago.



What is wrong with the sentence?

ITS NOT***It has an incorrect conjunctive adverb.***

Answer 1

I think what is wrong with the sentence is that it is a run-on sentence. 

Answer 2

The sentence is not grammatically correct as for it is a run on sentence with a "comma splice". To be fixed the sentence should be separated into 2 sentences with a period in between or a semicolon should precede the conjunctive adverb.

I hope this helps!