Question

Read the paragraph. What is the major fault of this paragraph?

During our summer vacations, we would always go to our cabin by Lake Henson and Butterfly Creek. These summer vacations were always fun and relaxing. All summer, we would take hikes, photograph the wildlife, and swim in the river. Summer smells, summer flowers—these are my memories of summer vacations at our cabin during those years.
A spelling mistakes


B sentence fragments


C too few details


D repeated words

Answer 1

I woulld think the answer is D

Answer 2

Answer: D) repeated words.

Step-by-step explanation: In the given paragraph, we can see the description of how the speaker used to spend (and enjoy) his summer vacations at a cabin. The major fault of the paragraph is the repeated words, the speaker repeats the word "summer" and also "summer vacations" too many times ("During our summer vacations," "These summer vacations were always fun,"All summer, we would take hikes," " Summer smells, summer flowers," "these are my memories of summer vacations"), to correct this fault the speaker should combine sentences using conjunctions or conjunctive adverbs to avoid repetition.