Question

Which of the following would be the most effective feedback to give in a peer review?

A)“Your paper is too short.”

b)“I don’t like the topic of your paper.”

c)“Your paper isn’t very interesting. You should make it more interesting.”

d)“Your paper reads quickly, but you might consider adding more details to make it more interesting.”

Answer 1

D

Step-by-step explanation:

You don't want to be mean when you give feedback.

Answer 2

the answer would be D . Here is why the peer writer would be helping the friend more by saying it this way. It shows that the peer is more knowledge-able. Also it's a better way of say the friend needs more details and information to make it more intriguing.