Question

The driving test examiner told me to turn right and park, and then I almost hit a tree, and then he screamed. Which revision corrects the faulty coordination in the sentence? The driving test examiner told me to turn right and park. When I almost hit a tree, he screamed. The driving test examiner told me to turn right, then park, and then I almost hit a tree, and he screamed. I turned right to park, and then I almost hit a tree, and then the driving test examiner screamed.

Answer 1

Here is the answer to the given question above. Based on the given sentence above, the revision that corrects the faulty coordination in the sentence is the first option: The driving test examiner told me to turn right and park. When I almost hit a tree, he screamed. Hope this answer helps.