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Which best revises sentence 3 to make it more precise? had so many grand plans in my head for the money I would soon be making, and I hurried to get ready as quickly as I could

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There were so many amazing plans going through my head for the for the large amounts of money I would soon be making I thought, as I ran as quickly as I could.
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