Step-by-step explanation:
Dear Tom,
New York is a great city and everything is different. People are talking with different accent and they are very kind. I have seen so many things and I can't wait to tell you all of that. I visited Statue of Liberty and I can tell you that it is very big and glorious.
The time is fast passing by and I am coming home in seven days. My family is thrilled to but they of course would not go out with me in the night so I can tell you that i miss you very much and I hope that we will go to New York one day.
How are everyone back in England? How are you? I can't wait to see you all.
Greetings!
Mark