Question

I want to make sure there is no spelling errors or ANYTHING out of place

Here is my paragraph



I want this website to show off my enthusiasm for fishing. I began fishing when I was at the age of 7 years old. I enjoyed it so much that on my spare time I tried to reel in some fish. To this day, I continue to make time to fish. I enjoy it so much that I teach others how to fish. Which as far as, what bait to use, what fishing rod to use, and most importanly how to enjoy fishing.

Answer 1

I want this website to show off my enthusiasm for fishing. I began fishing when I was 7 years old. I enjoyed it so much that on my spare time I tried to reel in some fish. To this day, I continue to make time to fish. I enjoy it so much that I teach others how to fish. Which as far as, what bait to use, what fishing rod to use, and most importantly how to enjoy fishing.

Step-by-step explanation:

'at the age of' is not needed in that sentence and just makes it drag on longer than it should. Importantly was spelt wrong. Other than those two things, it isn't a bad paragraph.