Question

I'm writing an essay on culinary arts and wanted to describe the shouting in a kitchen. What do you think is the best way to format the second part of the sentence?

The adrenaline, the controlled chaos, the shouting "sharp" "behind" "opening".​

Answer 1

The shouting must be “Sharp” because opening and behind produce cacophony, so it doesn’t sound as good. It’s also a type of imagery.

Answer 2

The adrenaline, the controlled chaos, the SHARP shouting

Step-by-step explanation:

Int the way that this is formatted I think Sharp should go before shouting.