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okay you need to have it come from the heart if you can give real life examples and make it sound a lil sad you will get a btter grade. no im not an a hole and play on teachers feelings but they like writings that come from the heart. i also recommend after you explain the problems you or someone you know are having or rlly any problems then, you say but i do have a solution i think will make it better then explain the solutions you have.
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im sorry if this didnt help :P best of wishes on your essay