Question

Could someone help me turn this thesis statement into a simpler and shorter thesis statement please?

Fitzgerald portrays the newly rich as being vulgar, gaudy, ostentatious, and lacking in social graces and taste as well as explaining and portraying the American dream in different characters

Answer 1

Fitzgerald suspects the newly rich as being vulgar, spoiled, lazy ,lacks social social graces, and taste as well as showing the American dream in different ways of lies.

Just a suggestion hope this helps.