Question

1. Correct the following business messages keeping the 7C's of effective communication in consideration.

i. Revise the following message for conciseness:
In this time of the day, we are sending this announcement to let everyone know that new medicines ordered by the hospital which are mentioned on the list will be available from next month.

Answer 1

Revise the following message for conciseness is explained below in detail.

Step-by-step explanation:

1. Concise
2. Clear
3. Correct
4. Concrete
5. Complete
6. Courteous
7. Coherent

These above mentioned 7 points are the 7 C's of communication.

At this contemporary time, this statement is to let everyone understand that the new medications and medicine required by the hospital and introduced on the list will be appearing next month.