Which thesis statement for my essay is the best? If you guys have any suggestions to change them I'm open to that!
1) Although it was a response to fear from the Americans to protect themselves, the internment of Japanese Americans was not justified. Due to the fact that Japanese rights were being violated, it was unconstitutional and could have been handled in a much better way.
2) The Internment of Japanese Americans during World War 2 was not justified. Japanese Americans’ rights were very much ignored / taken away and although it was a response to fear, it could have been handled in a much more constitutional manner.
3) The Internment of Japanese Americans was not justified. Despite the fact that Americans were afraid of being betrayed after the bombing of Pearl Harbor, Japanese rights were beyond violated. This act was unconstitutional and the management of fear from Americans could’ve been handled differently.