Question

Which sentence from the paragraph has been revised correctly? Even though, my life is very busy, I spend as much time as I can with my family. I often ask my dad who is an excellent athlete, to play soccer with me. I also enjoy taking walks, baking desserts, and playing cards, with my mom. However, nothing is better than watching movies with my loyal black cat, Max.

Answer 1

D) I often ask my dad, who is an excellent athlete, to play soccer with me.

Answer 2

D

Step-by-step explanation:

You almost always have to put a comma after the word however for a better flow of reading. Having a comma after the word loyal makes the sentence feel un-natural to read. So that comma should be removed. The rest of the options just made the correct sentences grammatically incorrect, which is why D is the best option.