Question

The writer is considering deleting the underlined text in sentence 14 (reproduced below).

Salt in human sweat is a goat magnet, worse still, some thoughtless and irresponsible people feed the goats directly.
Should the writer keep or delete the underlined text?

Answer 1

d) delete it, because it distracts from the writer's purpose of emphasizing human safety concerns by using language that focuses blame on human visitors to the park

Answer 2

D) Delete it, because it distracts from the writer's purpose of emphasizing human safety concerns by using language that focuses blame on human visitors to the park.