Which passage violates all of the rules of concise and precise writing?
A. The barely moving train seemed, in my humble and lowly opinion,
as I am not a train expert, to be having some seriously disturbing
trouble with the process of track changing, and the whole train
also needed a really good washing and professionally done paint
job.
B. That train was creeping along the track as it tried to change tracks
successfully
C. The moving train seemed to be having some trouble changing
tracks, and it needed a good paint job.
D. None of the above are correct.