Question

Using your understanding of restrictive and nonrestrictive information, rewrite the paragraph below. Correct the punctuation errors by adding or removing commas.

Moving to a new place can be tough on anyone especially if the move is to a new state. At the start of a move you may think that many things will be different in your life, and that nothing will be enjoyable, ever again. Your surroundings may have to change. Your good friends and favorite activities however do not. You can still maintain your friendships through a variety of technological ways which may include talking on a cell phone, writing an email, and seeing a friend on video chat. Technology can help you stay in contact, and be up to date with everything that your friends are doing. You can even continue doing your favorite activities which might include sports. Most towns and cities have their own teams, leagues, or clubs for popular activities. So you really do not have to give up what you love to do. Knowing, that your friends and activities do not have to change, can help you be more open to the idea of moving.

Answer 1

Answer: At the start of the move, (comma)

You can still maintain your friendships through a variety of technologies---

Most towns and cities have their own teams, leagues, or clubs for popular activities, so you really don’t have to give up what you enjoy.

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Answer 2

Moving to a new place can be tough on anyone especially if the move is to a new state. At the start of the move, you may think that many things will be different in your life and that nothing would be enjoyable ever again. Your surroundings may have to change, your good friends and favorite activities ,however, do not. You can still maintain your friendships through a variety of technological ways which may include talking on a cell phone, writing an email, and seeing a friend on video chat. Technology can help you stay in contact and be up to date with everything that your friends are doing....(this missing part does not need any corrections) Knowing that your friends and activities do not have to change can help you to be more open to the idea of moving.

Explanation: This what I submitted as my response. Hope this helps!