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Read the paragraph.
How should this paragraph be revised so that it is
correct?
Even though my life is very busy, I spend as much time
as I can with my family. I often ask my dad, who is an
excellent athlete, to play soccer with me. I also enjoy
taking walks, baking desserts, and playing cards with
my mom. However, nothing is better than watching
movies with my loyal, black cat, Max.
The word "soccer" should be capitalized.
The comma after "however" should be removed.
The word "cat" should be capitalized.
The comma after "loyal" should be removed.
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