Question

Can u please help me find the mistakes?

The sun was just slipping below the horizon when aunt Nakki who had ridden her camel from the sultry areas to the south Arrived at our camp near Siwa egypt. (6)​

Answer 1

Answer: The answer is "The sun was just slipping below the horizon when Aunt Nakki, who had ridden her camel from the sultry areas to the south, arrived at our camp near Siwa, Egypt.

Answer 2

you are missing some commas

Step-by-step explanation:

the sentence should be

The sun was just slipping below the horizon when aunt Nakki , who had ridden her camel from the sultry areas. to the south, arrived at our camp