Question

Read the first sentences in Dorthea’s personal narrative.

1. Jamie and Jeremy are my next door neighbors. 2. They are brother and sister. 3. Everyday, myself walks to school with them.

What problem needs to be fixed in Dorthea’s narrative?

Dorthea should identify herself as a character in her narrative.
The pronoun “they” should be replaced with the pronoun “we.”
In sentence 3, Dorthea should identify herself with a different pronoun.
The word “Everyday” should be removed from the beginning of sentence 3

Answer 1

The answer will be c

Step-by-step explanation:

i took the test on edgenuity

Answer 2

The answer is most likely C.

Step-by-step explanation:

All of the other answers don't seem to help except for C.

A doesn't seem to change much if she puts herself in a 3rd person.

B is wrong by just using common sense.

and D wouldn't seem to help either.

(hope that helps. ^^)