Question

1

Which sentence should be removed from the
conclusion?
sentence 1
sentence 3
sentence 5
sentence 7

Answer 1

Answer: Sentence 7

Step-by-step explanation:

On edge, the next question on my test is "Which revision would most improve sentence 7?" so I'm assuming that something was wrong with 7.

Answer 2

Sentence 7 you don’t need 7 sentences in a conclusion