Question

Cambria sang in her school’s talent showcase three songs making her grandparents proud.

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Answer 1

Cambrias' grandparents were proud because in the talent show she sang three songs.

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Answer 2

Cambria made her grandparents proud by singing three songs in her school's talent show.

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