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Please make this sentence more descriptive (anything works). "I walk on the icy road towards the eery house."

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Answer:

"My boots crunch in the ice as I lumber closer to the eery house. The road rumbles under my steps, shining with frost."

Step-by-step explanation:

You can use adjectives and more words and sentences to make your writing more detailed. It's really easy once you got the hang of it!

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User Erken
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Answer:

As I walked along the cold, dark, and icy road I could see my destination: an old, lumbered, eery house. It's dark windows and tall frames made me instinctively want to turn around, but alas I had no choice but to keep going.

Step-by-step explanation:

Hopefully this is good.

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